Sunday, January 1, 2012
Please help I need your opinion on my writing?
I think you are a decent writer but you have some problems though they can easily be fixed. One thing that I noticed is that you repeat the same word multiple times (we) This by can be easily be fixed by finding synonyms. I used to have that same problem. What helps me and might help you is to read more. that way you can compare your writing to a professionals, see the differences and change your writing for the better. Hope I helped, or told you what you wanted to hear! :-D
Why is American Healthcare so much more expensive when it isn't as good as the rest of the world?
This one is easy, because the rest of the world doesn't have 15 insurance companies pulling in hundreds of billions (that's not a typo) in profit.
Triplet names and other triplet related problems...?
You have confused me a little bit, one of your twins has had a name change so it seems, in a previous question you said your twins names were Kady and James, now they are Daniel and James. What happen there i wonder???
If I buy this computer?
If it's just going to be used for basic surfing and typing up doents on Word or whatever program. 2 gigs of RAM would be sufficient. You'd want to only throw in more if they were going to use it for programs more taxing on the system.
Do the prophesies of Edger Casey and Siener van Rensburg work together to give us an accurate picture?
NO, the prophecies of Edgar Casey and Siener van Rensburg do not work together to give us an accurate picture !
Three people were shot to death and six were wounded in Colorado on Sunday in two church-related shootings.?
After Nebraska, Virginia and the others should the carrying of handguns be made compulsory to stop these outrages?
Why do most public toilet doors open inwards?
This is something that really gets my goat. Whenever I visit the Gents in a pub, I wash my hands afterwards only for the majority of blokes to walk right past me without washing theirs. They then pull the doors open to leave and I have to get hold of the same handle, thus rendering my hygiene routine completely useless. Why then don't they make the doors open outwards so I could push it open with my foot instead of grabbing the dirty handle? It may seem a bit OCD but it makes sense.
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